Smitten In Trance.
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What mystery do you conceal
In the black of your fluttering eyes
What magic spells have you cast
In your smile, that weakens me so.
In the black of your fluttering eyes
What magic spells have you cast
In your smile, that weakens me so.
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Why does the moon fade away
To my lost spirit`s inner sight
When nights are full of light
And days are just another day
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Why do my legs hop like mad
Ears filled with music, slow and sad
In a life so calm and straight
Why the turbulence and love of fate
Streams trickle, merge and flow
Flowing steadily towards the sea
In a rush as we meet and faces, glow
Will we flow along, truth to the dream be.
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Do my eyes betray me, my dear
As I stare wide-eyed sans fear
As you walk past me, silent and clear
All notions of loss, illusions mere
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Hovering above, the white clouds below
The world cries "Wake up, you fool!"
Hold my hand, lest reality dawns, my love
I shall die in here, in trance, my love.
Comments
"What mystery do you conceal
In the black of your fluttering eyes"
Love this line the most...This is a great poem Srijit!! Just awesome and so simple but so awesome!
The world cries "Wake up, you fool!"
Hold my hand, lest reality dawns, my love
I shall die in here, in trance, my love.
Just awesome and the pics to match.
Smitten alright...thts me!
:)
An another great poem from you.
@Starry : I`m so glad you like it. Yes and I kept pics, so that there is a visual effect on the words. :)Thanks a lot for your appreciation.
@Velu : That`s a nice profile pic buddy. Nice to know that you liked the post. :)
@Priya : Thanks priya. Thanks a lot for your appreciation.
@Natasha : All our dreams transport uu to mystical realms and fantasies which we long for dont they, natasha ?
@Has to be me : no.. on the contrary, the love bug hasn`t even flown past me yet.. I wish it did..! :)
the way i see the sun set into the sea...
How it slowly stepped ...
the burning,
the brightness
disappeared ...
Reading i was with my wide eyes...
but was in a trance ...
It was a wonderful feeling!
Lovely poetry indeed!
Thanks a lot passerby..
@Maya : No!. I would have loved to say yes, but No maya seriously this was just a dream :)
@Natasha : Thanks for stopping by to share your thoughts :)
:) I wasnt able to access blogs untill today!! So had missed some of ur earlier posts:) Btw, i have got the results of 6th SEM :D
And i have posted few more songs..This time English Poems. I hav etried and composed tune for them all....
@Gaurav: Hi Gaurav, Been a long time. Thanks for your appreciation. Have Fun!
Well written sir :)
@Sreejith :Thanks for the appreciation, buddy..
@Marthyan : This is just my small tribute to you, Marthyan.. After all, you`re the master of Love Poems.
waiting for more...